Sunday, August 9, 2015

Desire


Senses heighten
Eyes shut tight
Skin tingles
Fires ignite

Burning deeply
In my soul
Breathing smoke
My story's told...

C Hummel Kornell


Posted by CHummelKornell at 7:04 AM

12 comments:

  1. AnonymousAugust 9, 2015 at 7:55 AM

    Sensual. I love the imagery, though is the story told....... I like the burning question.

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  2. GailAugust 9, 2015 at 8:54 AM

    I rarely read before I write my prompt. I'm glad I did...delicious.

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  3. Bekkie SanchezAugust 9, 2015 at 10:57 AM

    You nailed this prompt!

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  4. Kathe W.August 9, 2015 at 5:42 PM

    well done!

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  5. DeepaAugust 9, 2015 at 10:54 PM

    Nice take on the prompt

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  6. Maria MaineroAugust 10, 2015 at 12:51 AM

    Story's told. . . happens fast sometimes.

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  7. UnknownAugust 10, 2015 at 5:29 AM

    And that is exactly right. :-) Nice description of desire. Enjoyed this very much.

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  8. Danielle EstellaAugust 10, 2015 at 6:40 AM

    I like the last two lines:)

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  9. CHummelKornellAugust 10, 2015 at 8:17 AM

    Thanks! to each of you who have commented. I appreciate you taking your time to share your thoughts with me. Sometimes it's hard to know if what I feel is really what others experience.

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  10. gautami tripathyAugust 10, 2015 at 9:04 AM

    Gripping, sensual...

    ​stinging the sin

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  11. Maude LynnAugust 10, 2015 at 11:53 AM

    Excellent write! I really liked it.

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  12. brudbergAugust 11, 2015 at 12:17 PM

    I think that's a tale that is often told. Just smoke in the end.

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