Sunday, August 9, 2015

Desire


Senses heighten
Eyes shut tight
Skin tingles
Fires ignite

Burning deeply
In my soul
Breathing smoke
My story's told...

C Hummel Kornell


12 comments:

  1. Sensual. I love the imagery, though is the story told....... I like the burning question.

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  2. I rarely read before I write my prompt. I'm glad I did...delicious.

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  3. Story's told. . . happens fast sometimes.

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  4. And that is exactly right. :-) Nice description of desire. Enjoyed this very much.

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  5. Thanks! to each of you who have commented. I appreciate you taking your time to share your thoughts with me. Sometimes it's hard to know if what I feel is really what others experience.

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  6. Excellent write! I really liked it.

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  7. I think that's a tale that is often told. Just smoke in the end.

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